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Everything sounded great until the lead attacked... Good song, the lead is to high for my liking and slides to much. Everything else is so good

DanTheMusician responds:

Understandable. Thanks for the feedback!

Another great song. It's really unique and interesting. I love the bass/brass (idk what exactly it is) before the 2nd drop. The transitions worked well, the instruments you used are really cool. As it's a part of the style you're going for I understand the drums/percussion you used, but they felt a bit off beat when first introduced in the first drop. Also the second half of the second drop is amazing.
Keep up the good work!

Rume responds:

Thank you! <3

There is no way you did this in Fl studio mobile, like how did you make the lead? I have no idea how you could have made it except by using samples. The mastering is really good I guess, the drops are really good, I like the melody. The only thing I need to critique is the abrupt ending.

ArkeMusic responds:

The lead *IS* made in FL Mobile, but I combined mini-lead-projects after mini-lead-projects. It took a while, I mean some days but the result is amazing (it was worth those days). For the ending I didn't have any ideas, so I said that I'll do the easiest ending in my head : the abrupt one. So in conclusion, it is possible, but not to create the lead in that project in which is the full song. Thanks for your feedback about my song! In the close future I'll buy a PC, and I'll take everything from beginning, so it will take some time to "self-learn" again the music production process, because on mobile is something, on PC is other something.

Nice. I have no Ideas how to improve your song except maybe making the vocals a bit quieter. Good work!

Amazing song, but I fell like something is missing and I don't know how to describe it, maybe it's because your sub bass isn't following the pattern of the dropmelody enough? Also, you introduced the dropmelody a bit to early for my taste. This song has great potential, I'm sure you'll improve if you keep up the good work :)

Well... THIS IS DOPE!!!! Absolutely Amazing! You guys managed to make the flume influence hearable while creating something extremely unique. I get some serious Puff Daddy vibes (song by Jpegmafia and Kenny Beats) from the first drop.It may be a bit short, but it works extremely well with the overcompresed kicks (are they? idk). The Transition to the Interlude could be improved or be longer, it was a bit to abrupt. Just let me praise the second drop... It's borderline perfect. I just love it. Thank you both for creating this song, I hope for stuff as good as this in the future ;)

Rume responds:

Thank you! Flume is a great inspiration for me and I love his style as well. I will try to improve on making better transitions. I'm glad you liked it! :)

I think this is really good. You should work on the transition from Buildup to your drop. Please try to have both Frenchcore and Deathstep parts on the same Level. Your Growl is way to loud, the screaming sound (idk the name) could be introduced a bit earlier, your drop is a bit to repetitive. I tkink this has potential.

Dart-Music responds:

Thanks :) oh and the "screaming sound" was intended to be a wobble but I modified it and it sounded like this :p

Amazing. I think this is one of the best (riddim-) dubstep tracks I have heard on Newgrounds. The Ambient/Siren in the second drop is a bit annoying, but keep up the good work!

This song has such a happy vibe, it's amazing.

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